上次象博士指导小熊修改第一段话时,是这样讲的“:要想把文章的语言修改得美一些,要记住三个‘尽量’:能新鲜尽量新鲜,能生动尽量生动,能简洁尽量简洁。你记住这三个‘尽量’,在修改的时候就能找到下手处。面对一句话,你觉得它不新鲜,就想想是不是可能换一种说法,让它变得新鲜 The last time I read the first paragraph of my speech as a doctor's guide, I would like to say the following: "If you want to make the language of the article more beautiful, you should keep in mind the three 'best practices': you should try your best to be as fresh as possible and live as vividly as possible Concise as concise as possible.You remember these three 'try hard', you can find the starting place when you modify it.Faced with one sentence, you think it is not fresh, think about whether it is possible to change another way, make it become fresh