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1.优点:本文语句简略,条理清晰。写出了自己作为志愿者的观点。2.批阅手记:①处改为feel not only good。②处用得较好,用了句型:spend...doing sth.和宾语从句what I love to do。③处work为不可数名词,去掉a。点评
Advantages: This article is simple and clear. Write your own as a volunteer point of view. 2. Notes to read: ① Department changed to feel not only good. ② used better, with the sentence: spend ... doing sth. And the object clause what I love to do. ③ office work for uncountable nouns, remove a. Comments