小草有了水才能生存,小动物们有了食物才能活命,大自然有了保护才能美不胜收、生机勃勃,而我们这些孩子有了锻炼的机会,才能真正长大成人。所以,妈妈决定让我去看车,正好(希望)锻炼锻炼我的口语交际能力。(文章开头用排比句,增强气势,吸引注意力,并由排比句的内容引出“第一次看车”。由因到果,思路很好。)上午,阳光洒在地上,仿佛是被人(洒)落下的金子一般(删除),金光闪闪,我沐浴阳光,乘着风来到了(此 Grass with water to survive, the animals have food to survive, nature has the protection of the beautiful, vibrant, and we have these children have the opportunity to exercise in order to really grow up. So, Mom decided to let me go to the car, just (hope) to exercise my oral communication skills. (Articles at the beginning of the sentence with a row, to enhance the momentum to attract attention, and the contents of the row leads to “the first time to see the car.” From the fruit, the idea is very good.) Morning, the sun sprinkled on the ground, as if The gold that was sprinkled (sprinkled) was (removed), glittering, I bathed in the sunshine and came by the wind