初中学生涉世未深,生活阅历较浅,在作文中常出现以下几种状况:第一,对事物缺乏准确地认识,文章中东拉西扯,中心不明确;第二,行文如流水,没有主次,甚至文不达意;第三,缺少材料储备,生搬硬套,东拼西凑;第四,内容空洞,主题肤浅,更像无病呻吟。 Junior high school students do not go deep into the world, life experience is shallow, often appear in the composition of the following conditions: First, the lack of accurate understanding of things, the article lashed the Middle East, the center is not clear; second, wording like water, no primary and secondary Third, there is a lack of material reserves, and it is mechanically cumbersome. Fourth, the content is empty and the subject is superficial. It is more like groaning without disease.