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对于读写任务的发表看法部分，有的考生还懵懵懂懂，不得其法。有的考生虽然功底不错，但是总会出现要点不全，部分偏题，段落间逻辑混乱等情况，最终导致这部分难以得高分，甚至难以及格，让人扼腕痛惜。故笔者针对这些情况，总结出16字：各为一段、顺序写作、开段点题、层层深入。
一、各为一段
在平时的评卷过程中，总会发现有的学生整篇文章只有两段，概括为一段，发表看法为一段。这样导致评卷教师评卷时很难找其要点。甚至有的考生，这个要点写一句，又参杂另一个要点，再回到头一个要点，条理不清，逻辑混乱弄得评卷老师哭笑不得。虽然各要点需要有主有次，详略得当，但是有的考生对该展开写作的要点不展开，一句话带过。 “各为一段”， 即根据读写任务的要求，每个要点为一个段落。要点跃然纸上，条理清晰。
二、顺序写作
“顺序写作”， 即不要轻易打破试卷上给出的要点顺序。英语试卷中要点先后给出是有一定逻辑关系的。第一个要点先写，第二个要点后写，按照顺序来，逻辑关系相对紧密。
三、开段点题
布置好段落和写作顺序后，就需要“开段点题”，写好每个段落的中心句。就算是不写出中心句，也要与要点紧密相关。如2013年广东高考英语读写任务的三个要点可以这样写：
要点一：
1. You can hardly come across a cleaning worker except in the early morning for they always get up early to avoid the busy people. （艰辛）
2. When it comes to the ordinary work， nobody can deny the fact that cleaning is the most tiring and dirty work. （艰辛）
要点二：
1. I can’t imagine what a city would be like without a cleaning worker. （没有清洁工）
2. However， we ought to appreciate and respect the cleaning workers， whose work ensures us a clean environment. Just imagine what would come to people’s life because of absence of cleaning workers. （没有清洁工）
要点三：
1. Every ordinary job like cleaning has its own value， without which the whole society would come into a mess. （对平凡工作的看法）
2. So every ordinary job like cleaning matters in our daily life and every single ordinary worker deserves our respects. （对平凡工作的看法）
四、层层深入
“层层深入”要求考生在每个段落中心句写完以后，要紧紧围绕该中心句展开写作，展开方式有因果法、并列法、顺承法等。考生在写作时，须牢牢记住每个句子皆是为要点服务，围绕要点来写。
当然，考生要得到一个满意的分数，还需在用词、句式、逻辑关系等方面下功夫，做到用词地道，“洋气”十足，句式多样，错落有致，上下连贯，结构紧凑。
以下两篇文章就是按照“16字”诀写成，以飨读者：
1. You can hardly come across a cleaning worker except in the early morning for they always get up early to avoid the busy people. Wearing a mask， they spent hour after hour putting rubbish together， loading it onto the garbage truck and then carrying it away. It hits me how tiring it is for a cleaning worker to do his regular work every day and even he has to swallow the prejudice from others.
I can’t imagine what a city would be like without a cleaning worker. Rubbish without being cleared would pile up，becoming a small mountain and give off bad smells of rotted wastes. People would live or work in such a dirty and messy environment that they can’t focus on their work， and worse still， their health would also suffer.
Every ordinary job like cleaning has its own value， without which the whole society would come into a mess. Any behavior to classify them is not right. Only when the ordinary work is well completed can our society function properly. 2. When it comes to the ordinary work， nobody can deny the fact that cleaning is the most tiring and dirty one. The cleaning workers works long hours cleaning the streets before people get up. They bathe themselves in the dusty air and breathe the bad smell produced by the rotted wastes. Their sweaty clothes can hardly get dry because of long time in cleaning and removing the rubbish.
However， we ought to appreciate and respect the cleaning workers， whose work ensures us a clean environment. Just imagine what would come to people’s life because of absence of cleaning workers. Piles of rubbish would remain where it is， giving off bad smell， which would not only cause pollution to the city but destroy the hope people hold for life.
So every kind of ordinary work like cleaning matters in our daily life and every single ordinary worker deserves our respects. Without their tiring and boring work， our society would lose its function. And every single ordinary worker should also value your job and attach more importance to it. Only in this way can our society go on better.
（作者单位：惠来县慈云实验中学）
责任编校 蒋小青
一、各为一段
在平时的评卷过程中，总会发现有的学生整篇文章只有两段，概括为一段，发表看法为一段。这样导致评卷教师评卷时很难找其要点。甚至有的考生，这个要点写一句，又参杂另一个要点，再回到头一个要点，条理不清，逻辑混乱弄得评卷老师哭笑不得。虽然各要点需要有主有次，详略得当，但是有的考生对该展开写作的要点不展开，一句话带过。 “各为一段”， 即根据读写任务的要求，每个要点为一个段落。要点跃然纸上，条理清晰。
二、顺序写作
“顺序写作”， 即不要轻易打破试卷上给出的要点顺序。英语试卷中要点先后给出是有一定逻辑关系的。第一个要点先写，第二个要点后写，按照顺序来，逻辑关系相对紧密。
三、开段点题
布置好段落和写作顺序后，就需要“开段点题”，写好每个段落的中心句。就算是不写出中心句，也要与要点紧密相关。如2013年广东高考英语读写任务的三个要点可以这样写：
要点一：
1. You can hardly come across a cleaning worker except in the early morning for they always get up early to avoid the busy people. （艰辛）
2. When it comes to the ordinary work， nobody can deny the fact that cleaning is the most tiring and dirty work. （艰辛）
要点二：
1. I can’t imagine what a city would be like without a cleaning worker. （没有清洁工）
2. However， we ought to appreciate and respect the cleaning workers， whose work ensures us a clean environment. Just imagine what would come to people’s life because of absence of cleaning workers. （没有清洁工）
要点三：
1. Every ordinary job like cleaning has its own value， without which the whole society would come into a mess. （对平凡工作的看法）
2. So every ordinary job like cleaning matters in our daily life and every single ordinary worker deserves our respects. （对平凡工作的看法）
四、层层深入
“层层深入”要求考生在每个段落中心句写完以后，要紧紧围绕该中心句展开写作，展开方式有因果法、并列法、顺承法等。考生在写作时，须牢牢记住每个句子皆是为要点服务，围绕要点来写。
当然，考生要得到一个满意的分数，还需在用词、句式、逻辑关系等方面下功夫，做到用词地道，“洋气”十足，句式多样，错落有致，上下连贯，结构紧凑。
以下两篇文章就是按照“16字”诀写成，以飨读者：
1. You can hardly come across a cleaning worker except in the early morning for they always get up early to avoid the busy people. Wearing a mask， they spent hour after hour putting rubbish together， loading it onto the garbage truck and then carrying it away. It hits me how tiring it is for a cleaning worker to do his regular work every day and even he has to swallow the prejudice from others.
I can’t imagine what a city would be like without a cleaning worker. Rubbish without being cleared would pile up，becoming a small mountain and give off bad smells of rotted wastes. People would live or work in such a dirty and messy environment that they can’t focus on their work， and worse still， their health would also suffer.
Every ordinary job like cleaning has its own value， without which the whole society would come into a mess. Any behavior to classify them is not right. Only when the ordinary work is well completed can our society function properly. 2. When it comes to the ordinary work， nobody can deny the fact that cleaning is the most tiring and dirty one. The cleaning workers works long hours cleaning the streets before people get up. They bathe themselves in the dusty air and breathe the bad smell produced by the rotted wastes. Their sweaty clothes can hardly get dry because of long time in cleaning and removing the rubbish.
However， we ought to appreciate and respect the cleaning workers， whose work ensures us a clean environment. Just imagine what would come to people’s life because of absence of cleaning workers. Piles of rubbish would remain where it is， giving off bad smell， which would not only cause pollution to the city but destroy the hope people hold for life.
So every kind of ordinary work like cleaning matters in our daily life and every single ordinary worker deserves our respects. Without their tiring and boring work， our society would lose its function. And every single ordinary worker should also value your job and attach more importance to it. Only in this way can our society go on better.
（作者单位：惠来县慈云实验中学）
责任编校 蒋小青