叶圣陶说:“假若有所感性,这当是不吐不快的,则必须本于内心的郁积,发乎情性的自然。”然而,习作教学中这样的发乎情性的习作往往却因其语言的平凡、稚拙被打入冷宫,那些成人式思维的、有时尚感的、语言华丽、感情浓烈、构思近乎完美的“高水准”习作则更能“打动”老师。 Ye Shengtao said: “If there is something sensual, it should not be spit and unpleasant, then it must be inwardly depressive and spontaneous nature.” However, the practice of teaching such sentimental exercises are often Because of its ordinary language, the childlike innocence was forced into cold limbs, those adult thinking, fashion sense, gorgeous language, strong feelings, the idea is almost perfect “high standard ” practice is more “impressed ” teacher.