关于写亲人的细节,不能仅在某个时间的某件事中捕捉,在成长过程中,会出现多个阶段,幼儿、儿童、青少年,在那些阶段,有时会发现父母关爱的方式变了,写到作文里,各阶段同样不能少了细节。有些同学写了这方面的文章,也有细节,不过仍缺少感染力。问题在哪儿?来看作文《在臂膀和脊背中的爱》,标题中“臂膀”“脊背”是两个细节,代表两个阶段:幼时和少年 The details about writing a loved one can not be captured only in one thing at a time. During the growth process, multiple stages such as young children, children and adolescents will emerge. In those phases, the way in which parents care will be found sometimes changes. Written to the composition, the same phase can not be less detail. Some students wrote articles in this area, there are details, but still lack of appeal. Look at the essay “Love in the arms and backs,” in the title “Arm” and “Back” are two details that represent two phases: childhood and teenage