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【真题回放】以“歌声”为题写一篇600字左右的文章,除诗歌外文体不限。【失误原文】歌声■李倩不要以为我是音乐家,也不要以为我是未来的歌星,更不要以为我是音乐痴呆;我只是一个音乐爱好者。(这组排比句信手写来,冗赘晦涩,如果删去,行文的条理也就清晰多了。)我从四岁起开始练唱歌。每天傍晚都会从我家传出歌声。因此,邻居们总是给我家提意见,说噪音吵了他们。(建议开头应直接引入话题,开门见山。)光阴似箭,日月如梭。转眼间,我已经长大了,歌
Really】 【Zhenti to “song ” as a title about 600 articles, in addition to poetry, style is not limited. Do not think I am a musician, do not think I am the future singer, not to think I am music dementia; I am just a music lover. (This group of lines than the handwritten letters, redundant obscure, if deleted, the text will be much clearer organization.) I started practicing singing since the age of four. Songs come from my house every evening. Therefore, neighbors always give my opinion, saying noisy noisy them. (It is recommended that the beginning should be directly introduced topic, go straight to the point.) Time flies, the sun and the moon flies. Suddenly, I have grown up, song