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观察是抒写的根本著名作家梁晓声今年暑假里曾经做过一个很好的讲座,他谈了青少年写作急需解决的一个根本问题就是观察意识的缺失、观察能力的低下。没有一双观察生活的慧眼,写真话、抒真情无疑成了无源之水、无本之木,从这个意义上说,写真情实感首先不是技巧问题。梁晓声提到这样一件事,一个家长派来请梁老师辅导作文的高三学生跟着他去了一趟商场,回来后那学生说什么也没有看到。梁晓声引导他回想:商场门口是不是有人用机器算命商场里面是不是有人当场宰杀幼鸽一个很有身份的老者是不是在大蒜摊前仔细比较两扎大蒜头数的多寡然后砍价半天卖黄鳝的姑娘在丢下书本照应顾客和捧起书本学习时是不是转换得像调电视频道一样迅速自然这一说那个学生全都想起来了,而梁晓声并不是要辅
The famous writer Liang Xiaosheng who wrote observations has done a very good lecture this summer. He talked about a basic problem that youngsters need to solve urgently is to observe the lack of consciousness and the ability to observe. Without an eye for observing life, writing truth and blasphemy will undoubtedly become a passive source of water and a tree without roots. In this sense, the feeling of realism is not a skill issue at first. Liang Xiaosheng mentioned such a thing. A third-year student sent by a parent to ask Mr. Liang to assist with essay writing followed him to a shopping mall. After returning, the student said nothing. Liang Xiaosheng guides him to recall: The entrance to the mall is not someone using a machine fortune telling. Is there someone who kills young birds on the spot? A very old man is not careful to compare the number of garlic heads in front of garlic stalls and then cut the price for half a day. When the girl dropped the book to take care of the customer and took the book to study, it was not as quick and natural as the tune TV channel. This said that the student all remembered, but Liang Xiaosheng was not