将作文方法植入童话故事,用童话故事讲解作文方法,在快乐阅读中获得写作知识,突破传统式作文辅导的枯燥,增强趣味性与实用性。人物介绍气球猫男生,有一点淘气,还有那么一点点傲气。豌来鹅女生,话语不多,比其他女主多了一些稳重和智慧。布老鼠男生,又淘气又胆小,经常“舌头抽筋”说反话。笑的时候请注意阅读同学们的作文,发现一个普遍存在的问题:几乎没有人物的表情描写。无论人物的动作、心理,还是语言描写,都离不开表情描写。比如人走在路上,速度快慢、距离远近、轻松或劳累,都会体现在表情上;比如心中的喜怒哀乐, The essay method is implanted into the fairy tales, the fairy tales are used to explain the essay methods, the writing knowledge is gained in the happy reading, breaking the boring of the traditional writing counseling and enhancing the interestingness and practicality. Character introduction cat boy, a little naughty, there is a little bit arrogant. Peas goose girls, few words, more than other hostess some more steady and wisdom. Cloth rat boys, but also naughty and timid, often “tongue cramps ” to say the opposite. When you laugh, please pay attention to reading the compositions of your classmates and discover a common problem: there is almost no character description. Regardless of the character’s movements, psychology, or language description, are inseparable from the description. Such as people walking on the road, speed, distance, easy or tired, will be reflected in the expression; such as emotions in the heart,