听妈妈说,爸爸的鼾声非常有韵味。爸爸的鼾声不只是一味的“呼噜”,还有此起彼伏的变化。在妈妈的心目中,爸爸的鼾声就像乐器奏出的乐曲一样。(起笔不凡,“韵味”、“乐器奏出的乐曲”不仅巧设悬念,也定下了全文感情的基调。)每当夜深人静,万籁俱寂之时,只听见一种细微的声音从 Listening to my mother, Dad’s buzzing sounds very savory. Dad’s snoring is not just blindly “snoring”, but there are still some changes. In her mother’s eyes, Dad’s buzzing sounds like a musical instrument. (Extraordinary writing, “musical flavor”, “music music played” not only clever suspense, but also set the tone of the full text of the feelings.) When the dead of night, when the silence is still only heard a subtle sound from