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小学作文教学除指导课和讲评课以外,我觉得教师在细致批改之后,进一步写好作文批语是一个不可忽视的环节。要充分发挥批语的作用。批语一般分总批和眉批两种。总批写在篇末,是就儿童作文的思想内容,篇章结构上重要问题加以总评,并提出希望和要求。眉批写在页端,指出用词、造句、标点等方面的优缺点。修改时,文字修改与符号修改相结合。整篇整段问题,就写上批语。如《游览西江公园》作文中,一个学生把“出发前的准备直至公园”这部分内容写了三百来字,占
In addition to the teaching of primary composition in addition to guidance classes and commentaries, I think teachers in the meticulous revision, further writing essay is an important part of the link. We should give full play to the role of criticisms. General approval of the total number of criticisms and eyebrow approved two. The total written in the end of the book, is the content of the ideological content of children’s essay, chapter structure of the important issues to be commented, and put forward hope and requirements. Mei Mei wrote in the page, pointed out the use of words, sentences, punctuation and other aspects of the advantages and disadvantages. Modify, the text changes and symbolic changes combined. Write the whole batch of questions. Such as “tour of Xijiang Park,” composition, a student to “prepare for departure until the park ” This part of the content to write three hundred words, accounting for