小读者们,还记得作文王国妙笔争霸赛中第一回合的肖像描写战吗?双方评议了一篇习作,太阳队队员发现了此文在肖像描写中存在自相矛盾露破绽,面面俱到无重点和千篇一律入俗套的毛病。而简妙队技高一筹,不但发现了此文画蛇添足无用功和毫无条理顺序乱的问题,更是提出了多种修改建议。结果,简妙队胜出。在本期的语言描写战中,双方又会有什么表现呢?敬请阅读。 Small readers, still remember the composition of the kingdom Miaofei pen competition first round portraits of the war? Both sides appraised an essay, the Suns team found the portrait description of the existence of self-contradictory flaws, all non-focus and Thousands of stereotypes defects. The simple coup team superiority, not only found this superficial futility and disorderly orderly disorder, but also proposed a variety of suggestions. As a result, Min-Miao won. In this issue of language description of the war, the two sides will have any performance? Please read.