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获奖原因:作者在如诗歌一般优美的文字中将深刻的人生哲理向我们娓娓道来。形式的创新令我们眼前一亮、耳目一新,五段诗歌的嵌入使本文脱颖而出。优美舒畅的文字描绘、真切诚挚的情感流露是本文的另一亮点。此外,利用“分———总”的结构形式,分层述说,尽情发挥,最后一并升华到“假如需要选择,我选择———继续努力”的主题。至此,作者积极的进取精神我们可从中窥见一斑
Reasons for the award: The author embarks on a deep philosophy of life in poetic and graceful writing. The innovation of the form made us look bright and refreshing. The embedding of the five paragraph poems made this article stand out. The beautiful and smooth textual depiction and genuine and sincere sentiment are another highlight of this article. In addition, using the “centralized-total” structure, we will use layered presentations to make full use of our efforts and finally sublimate to the theme of “If I need to choose, I choose to continue —”. At this point, the author’s aggressive spirit allows us to see through it.