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作文评语不仅要对作文本身的优缺点作出客观的评析,而且有时还要对学生在作文中表现出的思想动态、性格特征等作出恰当的褒扬和中肯的批评,既让学生的写作水平有所提高,又在做人方面有所改进。我写的作文评语大多是鼓励性的,但也有善意的、含蓄的劝导。针对不同的对象,进行不同的评析,既能激发学生的写作欲望,提高他们的写作兴趣,同时又能端正他们的思想,平衡他们的心态。现摘录这一学期我写的几则评语。
Writing reviews not only make an objective appraisal of the advantages and disadvantages of the composition itself, but also occasionally criticize and critically criticize the students’ ideological trends and personality traits in their composition, which not only allows students to write well Improve, but also improve in life. The essay reviews I write are mostly encouraging, but there are also goodwill and subtle persuasion. Different objects for different assessment, both to stimulate students’ desire to write, improve their writing interest, while correcting their thoughts and balance their mentality. I now excerpt a few comments I wrote this semester.