舒曼手记看到陶晶的习作,我记得是一个春天的傍晚,在我们的电子邮箱。我喜欢在傍晚时上网看邮件。那天,春天的风从窗外吹来,很柔很清很爽,一小阵儿一小阵儿的,很有些浪漫,春的味道正浓。我一页一页地翻读着这个南京师大附中初一的小姑娘的作品,心里揣摩着,我是否能解读这颗十二岁的心灵。陶晶的电邮很长,除了作品,一点别的文字都没有。散文、诗歌、散文诗,好家伙,十几篇,洋洋洒洒。陶晶很自信,她相信她的作品一定能吸引我的目光。初读她的作品,看到她选材很广,志向也很高远,对成长的思考更让我慨叹;细品,又觉她的文笔轻灵,诗意、柔美中,还有一份坚定。终于,我的目光定格在《远方》、《二胡唱晚》、《十二岁的风景》。这三篇作品,很能反映她的写作风格。再读,我又想,如果她的作品多几分写实,会更加厚重丰满耐读。当我又一次地融入夜色中时,我豁然,原来,那晚的一切都和往常没有两样,刚才那曼妙的感觉多半是陶晶的作品带给我的。真的,那一晚,我心情很好。 Schumann’s notes on seeing Tao Jing’s work, I remember it was a spring evening in our email address. I like to read emails online in the evening. On that day, the spring breeze was blowing from the window. It was very soft and refreshing. It was a small burst of a small burst of time. It was a bit romantic and the taste of spring was strong. I read the works of the young girl from the middle school in the middle school of Nanjing Normal University, one page at a time, wondering if I could interpret the twelve-year-old soul. Tao Jing’s e-mail is very long. In addition to his works, there is no other text. Prose, poetry, prose poetry, good guys, dozens of articles, eloquent. Tao Jing is very confident. She believes her work will certainly attract my attention. When she first read her work, she saw that she had a wide selection of materials and her aspirations were very high. Thinking about her growth made me sigh. When I studied fine products, she felt her writing was light and soft. There was a firmness in her poetic and soft beauty. Finally, my eyes set in the “far”, “Erhu singing late”, “12-year-old landscape.” These three works can reflect her writing style. Reading again, I also thought that if her works are more realistic, they will be more full-fledged and full-fledged. When I reintegrated into the night again, I suddenly realized that everything on that night was no different from what I used to do. It was mostly the impression that Tao Jing’s works brought me. Really, that night, I was in a good mood.