一朵盛开的紫藤花，被我捏在手里，细细地观赏，放在鼻前嗅闻。（是很好的开头。既然题目是“一朵花”，那么在开头的第一句话里，就应该让“花”字出现！）美丽的紫藤花像一个涉世未深的女孩，十分幼稚但却天真无邪。（比喻确切，令人产生美感。）与各种姹紫嫣红的奇花异卉比 A wisteria flower that was in full bloom was pinched in my hand, watched carefully, and sniffed in front of her nose. (It’s a good start. Since the title is “a flower”, then in the first sentence of the beginning, you should let the word “flower” appear!) The beautiful wisteria flower is like a girl who is not deeply involved and very childish. But it is innocent and innocent. (The exact metaphor makes one feel beautiful.) Compared with the exotic flowers of various colors