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★评委意见考生按照时间线索想象、虚构一段父子之间的故事。从孩童时期到进入中年,“我”与父亲的关系,随着“我”的成长不断地变化着。儿时对父亲的依恋,青春期的叛逆,中年后的奔波,作者把印象深刻的几件事依次排列开来,如一线串珠,颗颗晶莹。文尾“我”和儿子星夜相伴的情景,与文章开篇“我”与父亲快乐生活的片段遥相呼应,这样的对比正说明了生命的传承与阵痛。全文情思涌动,多处的细节描写透露出浓浓的父爱,让人甘之如饴。(小花)
★ Judges' comments The candidates took a time cue to imagine and fiction a story between father and son. From childhood to middle age, the relationship between “I” and my father changes constantly with the growth of “I”. My childhood attachment to my father, my rebellious adolescence, and the rush of middle-aged people, the author arranged several impressive things in sequence, such as beaded and crystal clear. The ending of Wen Mei “I” and her son's starry night echoes the opening “I” of the article and the fragments of his father's happy life. This contrast shows the inheritance and pain of life. The full text of emotions surging, many details of the description revealed a deep fatherly love, people willing to be as sweet. (Flower)