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编者推荐:此文第三自然段和最后一自然段都有“坚强”二字——规定了写向日葵的角度。倒数第二自然段中“也仍旧向阳……与阳光同在”诠,释了“坚强”此。文还需要升格:补充“坚强”的情节。
Editor’s Recommendation: There are “strong” characters in the third and last natural paragraphs of this article - it specifies the angle of writing a sunflower. In the penultimate natural segment, “is still sunny ... with the sun ”, explain “strong ” this. The essay also needs a promotion: supplement the “strong” plot.