病症解析习作中,如果我们能写出自己的真切感受,文章自然能打动人。然而不少同学在写感受时,时常忽略这三点:一要真实。要结合具体的记叙和描写真切、自然地表达自己的感受,不能牵强附会、无病呻吟。二要及时。写到某处,内心有什么想法就马上写出来,不要总是放在结尾部分一起写。三要有变化。随着事情的发展,感受也会有变化,写出情感变化,才能拨动读者的心弦。 Analysis of the illness in the exercise, if we can write their true feelings, the article can impress people. However, when many students write their feelings, they often overlook the three points: one must be true. To combine the specific narrative and description of real, natural expression of their feelings, can not be far-fetched, disease-free groan. Second, timely. Write somewhere, the heart of what ideas immediately written out, do not always write together at the end. Third, there must be changes. With the development of things, there will be changes in feelings, emotional changes written in order to dial the hearts of readers.