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题好一半文。去年多个省市的中考要求根据所供材料自拟题目作文,有些考生运用辞格拟出生动隽永的佳题,使阅卷教师“心动神凝一瞥间”,值得大家借鉴。 一、运用比喻 1999年南京市的中考作文是,提供一组漫画,要求“展开合理想象,写一篇记叙文”。漫画内容:小女孩佳佳暑假与妈妈上街拾到钱,妈妈用这钱买棒冰给佳佳,佳佳却把这棒冰交给了警察。不少考生拟题时不作推敲,随手写下“佳佳和她的妈妈”、“佳佳真好”这类平淡的题目,有位考生与众不同,拟出“烈日下,绽开一朵小
Half the article is good. Last year’s examinations in many provinces and cities required students to compose topic compositions based on the materials they provided. Some candidates used resignations to formulate vivid and timeless questions, which made it possible for readers to “stink between the hearts and minds”. First, the use of analogy In 1999, Nanjing City’s senior high school entrance examination essay is to provide a group of comics, asked “explore a reasonable imagination, write a narrative.” Content of the cartoon: Little girl Jiajia picked up the money in the summer vacation and her mother took to the street. My mother used this money to buy sticks of ice to Jia Jia. Allison gave it to the police. Many candidates did not make any scrutiny when drafting questions. With the handwriting under the dull title of “Jiajia and her mother” and “Jiajia”, one candidate was unique and proposed to “open under the hot sun.