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描写景物的作文能写些什么呢?首先要确定描写对象:天上有太阳、月亮、星星、云彩,地上有悠悠青山、涛涛江水……那么,如何引导同学写描写景物的作文呢?老师在这里教给同学们,描写景物要“八新”。一、题目拟定新。俗话说:“题好一半文。”题目是文章的眼睛。观察大自然景观后,要认真厘清思路,巧妙构思,拟定生动、有趣的题目。例如,有一个学生看见家乡的仙楼山上,有郁郁葱葱的树木,树下的野花盛开,争奇斗艳,不远处有人民英雄纪念碑。小作者便拟题——《美丽的仙楼山》,
What should we write about the composition of the scene? First of all, we must define the object of description: there are the sun, the moon, the stars and the clouds in the sky, the long green hills and the Tao Taojiang River on the sky ...... So, how to guide the students to write the compositions that describe the scenery? Here to teach students, describe the scenery to “Eight new ”. First, the topic proposed new. As the saying goes: “title is half the text. ” The title is the article’s eyes. After observing the natural landscape, we must conscientiously clarify ideas, ingenious ideas, to develop vivid and interesting topics. For example, one student saw the hometown of the cemetery hill, with lush trees, wildflowers under the tree in full bloom, contested, not far from the People’s Heroes Monument. Small authors will be the subject - “Beautiful Xianlou Mountain”