这本是一篇很容易写,且易写出彩的文章。我能想象到优秀的作文该是秀气、朴实却感人至深的小文章、小艺术品,让阅读者有新潮起伏的那种感觉,可是事与愿违。读完四百份作文,我只有一种感受:我再也不想读学生的心声了。严肃地说,他们没有心声,不知道这是不是高考严酷教育的失败,还是这群孩子真得麻木了?具体问题分析如下: This is an easy to write, easy to write color article. I can imagine that a good essay should be a delicate, simple and touching essay, a little artwork, and a reader who has the feeling of ups and downs. After reading four hundred essays, I have only one feeling: I never want to read the students’ voices. Seriously, they do not have aspirations, do not know if this is the failure of the harsh education entrance exam, or is this group of children really numb? The specific problems are analyzed as follows: