我们在写春游、秋游或写景时常会说“我看见了什么，这是什么，那是什么”之类的话，但很少写我觉得这是什么，那是什么，我感受到了什么，我的感觉怎么样。说得严重一些，我们在写这类作文时，往往忘记了自己的存在，忘记了自己作为一个参加活动的人的感觉的存在。这句话或许 When we write about the Spring Festival, the Autumn Tour or the scenery, we often say something like “What did I see, what is this, what is that?” But seldom wrote what I think this is, what it is, what I feel, my how do you feel. To put it more seriously, we often forget our own existence and forget the existence of our own feeling of being an active participant in writing such compositions. Maybe this sentence