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记得在以前的点评中我们一再地告诫同学们,写人的作文最要紧的是写出人物的个性特点来,而“大大的眼睛、黑黑的眉毛”这些外貌描写则是次要的,是为了突出人物的个性特点而服务的。本栏目这次刊登的两篇习作,在这方面都有很不错的表现。写出人物的个性特点也是有方法的,不外乎围绕人物的个性特点记几件事,或用一件事刻画出人物的个性特点。陈辉同学的《“贪”爸爸》,用的是第一种方法。他笔下的爸爸的个性特点就
I remember in the previous comments, we repeatedly warned students, write the most important thing is to write the composition of the characters personality traits come, and “big eyes, dark brows,” the appearance of the description is secondary , Is to highlight the personal characteristics of the characters and services. This section of the published two exercises, in this area has a very good performance. Writing personal characteristics of the character is also a method, nothing more than a few things around the characteristics of individuals remember a few things, or use one thing to characterize the personality traits. Chen Hui students “greedy” “father”, using the first method. His father’s personality characteristics