【教学片断】《生命生命》第二自然段的教学。师:先读一读,想想这段话写了件什么事。(出示:夜晚,我写稿子,一只飞蛾在我头上飞来飞去,骚扰着我。趁它停在台前小憩时,我一伸手捉住了它。我想弄死它,但它鼓动着双翅挣扎,我感到一股力量在跃动,强烈而鲜明。这样一只飞蛾,只要我的手指一用力,它就不会再动了。可是那翅膀,挣扎的生之欲望,令我震惊,我就放了它。) Teaching Piece The life of the second paragraph of the teaching. Teacher: First read, think about what this passage wrote something. (Show: Night, I wrote a manuscript, A moth flew over my head and harassed me. While it was resting on the stage, I caught my hand and I wanted to kill it, but It stirred its wings and struggled, and I felt a surge of force, strong and sharp, so that a moth could not move anymore as soon as my fingers were forced, but the wings, the desperate desire to struggle I was shocked and I let it go.)