传统教学中对学生作文过高要求,再加上教师评语像裁判一样生硬,刻板,冷冰冰。如语句不通顺,条理不清楚,中心不明确等,挫伤了孩子写作积极性。或空洞、含糊的评语,如文章很生动,内容具体,想象丰富等,使学生如坠入云雾之中,觉得作文很抽象,产生了一种恐惧心理,认为作文是一件很难的事,很苦的事。根据心理学家马 Traditional teaching students in writing too high demand, coupled with teacher comments as reckless, rigid, cold. Such as the statement is not fluent, not clear, the center is not clear, frustrated the enthusiasm of children writing. Or empty, vague comments, such as the article is very vivid, specific content, rich imagination, so that students fall into the clouds, that the composition is very abstract, resulting in a fear, that composition is a very difficult thing, Very bitter thing. According to the psychologist horse