辅导点拨这篇作文取材新颖,构思奇妙,语言生动活泼,作者把自己当成一棵大树,从一个截然不同的角度表现自己对学校的热爱。字里行间透露出清新的生活气息和儿童情趣。我是童星小学校园里的一棵大树,静静地站在学校操场的中央,我陪伴着这个学校很多年了!我很幸运,能够生长在童星小学里。清晨,当第一缕阳光洒在我身上时,一群群可爱的孩子排着整齐的队伍走进校园,经过我的身旁。我看到他们一张张可爱的脸庞,便 Counseling Dialogue The composition draws new ideas, wonderful ideas, vivid language, the author himself as a tree, from a completely different perspective on his love of the school. Between the lines reveals a fresh atmosphere of life and children’s taste. I am a big tree in the school of Tongxing Primary School, standing quietly in the middle of the school playground, and I have been with this school for many years! I was fortunate enough to be able to grow up in Tongxing Primary School. In the early morning, when the first rays of the sun sprinkled on me, a group of lovely children lined up neatly in the camp and passed by my side. I see them a lovely face, then