从前,有个叫二娃的牧童,白天带着羊儿到山坡上吃草,傍晚赶着羊儿回羊圈,日子过得挺开心。有一天早上,二娃像平时一样去放羊。可他刚到羊圈就吃了一惊:一夜之间少了好几只羊!他望着羊圈栅栏上的破洞,想起昨天邻居陈伯跟他说过,要尽快把这洞修好,可那时他没在意。“现在羊丢了,爹娘回来一定会批评我的,怎么紧扣画面内容展开想象,写出二娃内心的焦急。”眼泪直流“富有很强的画面感哦。通过对话来说明道理,是不是更通俗易懂了呢?结尾的感叹再次点明”亡羊补牢,为时未晚“这个中心。好词加油站:踪迹哭哭啼啼若有所思完好无缺 Once upon a time, there was a shepherd boy named Xiaowa, who grazed her on the hillside with herd during the day and shepherded the goat back to the sheepfold in the evening and had a great time. One morning, two baby go sheep as usual. But when he first arrived in the sheepfold, he was taken aback: several sheep were slaughtered overnight. He looked at the hole in the sheepfold fence and remembered yesterday that his neighbor Chen Bo had told him that he should fix the hole as soon as possible He did not mind then. ”Now the sheep lost, father and mother will come back to criticize me, how close to the screen content to start imagination, write two baby heart anxious. “ Tears DC ”rich strong sense of the picture oh. The truth is not more understandable? The end of the sigh once again point out “to remedy the situation, it is not too late,” the center .Familiar with gas stations: trace crying thoughtfully intact