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熊运华同志的微型小说《病灶》不乏优点:语言简练;没有初学写作者作品中常见的冗句、病句或生造的形容词语;有生动的细节和具体描写。从作品的构思来看,作者显然是想通过对王教授因“望子成龙”、“子承父业”,而千方百计为儿子高考作准备的描写,揭示和讽刺当今社会中许多家庭与父母在培养儿女上的走火入魔,这也是颇有现实意义的。遗憾的是,作品对主题的表现还不够深透,削弱了作品
There are many advantages of Comrade Xiong Yunhua’s novel “lesion”: concise language; no common verbal or repetitive phrases in beginner’s writing works; vivid details and specific descriptions. From the conception of the work, the author apparently wants to reveal and ironically many of the families and parents in today’s society are trying to cultivate their children through the description of Professor Wang’s preparation for his son’s college entrance examination because of “Succeeding in Succeeding” and “Subordinate to Fatherhood” On the go crazy, this is quite practical significance. Unfortunately, the performance of the work on the subject is not deep enough, weakening the work