语言是写好作文的第一关,没有熟练驾驭语言的能力想写出出彩的文章是很难的。对于考场作文而言,要想夺取高分,就必须以自己个性化的语言为载体抒写你的真情实感。下面摘取2002年中考几例满分作文的精彩片断加以评析,让我们来看一看小作者们是怎样用五彩笔描画自己的生活的。亮 Language is the first hurdle to writing a good composition. It is difficult to write a colorful article without the ability to master the language. For the examination essay, if you want to score high scores, you must write your true feelings with your own personalized language as the carrier. The following excerpts from several excellent scores in the 2002 China National Entrance Examination were assessed and analyzed. Let’s take a look at how small writers paint their lives with colorful pens. bright