有些同学作文空洞、枯燥、不具体、不形象。其中一个重要原因，就是在叙述时没有适当描写。描写是一种重要的表达方式，在叙述中结合必要的描写，可以使文章具体、形象、生动，从而增强文章的感染力。课文《一面》在写到“我”因囊中羞涩，面对一本喜爱的书，欲购不能，欲罢不 Some students are empty, boring, not specific, and not image. One of the important reasons is that it was not properly described in the narrative. Description is an important form of expression. Combining necessary descriptions in the narrative can make the article concrete, vivid, and vivid, thus enhancing the appeal of the article. The text “One Side” writes that “I” is shy in the bag and faces a favorite book.