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As we know， water is very important for us. It is reported that the water is only three-tenths of water is fresh water， only a little water to drink. We can’t live without water. We need to drink water every day and the food we eat needs water， too. We notice water is wasted seriously.
So， we should save the water and protect the water. We should use little water when we need to use it. For example， I don’t use too much water when I am washing my face or having a bath. When we don’t use the water， we should turn off the taps and so on. I’d like to tell you： “we can’t leave water. if there is no water， it is no life. ”
【简评】水是人类赖以生存和发展的重要资源之一，是不可缺少、不可代替的特殊资源。在学生的观念中，节约用水是每个学生、公民都应该做的一件事。作者用自己的行动来告诉我们应当如何节约用水，运用宾语从句，及when 引导的时间状语从句等知识点将文章写得很连贯。“It is reported that...”用固定短语阐明信息来源，体现用词的准确性，作者用自己的方式诠释着节约用水的重要性，构思独特。
指导教师：杨纯瑜
So， we should save the water and protect the water. We should use little water when we need to use it. For example， I don’t use too much water when I am washing my face or having a bath. When we don’t use the water， we should turn off the taps and so on. I’d like to tell you： “we can’t leave water. if there is no water， it is no life. ”
【简评】水是人类赖以生存和发展的重要资源之一，是不可缺少、不可代替的特殊资源。在学生的观念中，节约用水是每个学生、公民都应该做的一件事。作者用自己的行动来告诉我们应当如何节约用水，运用宾语从句，及when 引导的时间状语从句等知识点将文章写得很连贯。“It is reported that...”用固定短语阐明信息来源，体现用词的准确性，作者用自己的方式诠释着节约用水的重要性，构思独特。
指导教师：杨纯瑜