点评作为一篇三十年后同学相聚的发言稿,本文写得情感饱满,无论是对恩师谆谆教诲的感谢之情,还是对同学互助前行的友爱之情,以及对母校未来发展的真挚祝福。作者用真挚的语言,描写了所忆之人,所历之事,语言的画面感、情景感十分强。此外,文章的结构安排是十分精巧的,作者用古典诗句“先生之风,山高水长”(范仲淹的《严先生祠堂记》),“桃花潭水深千尺,不及汪伦送我情”(李白《赠汪伦》)及现代歌 Comments as a 30-year speech after classmates gathered together, this article writes full of emotion, both grateful for the teacher’s dedication, or love for classmates and help each other, as well as the sincere wishes for the future development of his alma mater . In a sincere language, the author describes the people she recalls, what she experienced, the language of the picture, and the feeling of the scene is very strong. In addition, the structure of the article is very exquisite, the author with the classical poem “gentleman of the wind, mountains and rivers ” (Fan Zhongyan’s “Yan ancestral temple”), “Peach Lake depth thousands of feet, less than Wang Lun sent me love ”(Li Bai“ donated Wang Lun ”) and modern song