一、学情检测“美丽的瞬间”的“美丽”病。以“美丽的瞬间”为题进行的片断写作练习中,突出表现为以下四个不足。1.“说粗话”。在许多同学的笔下,天总是蓝的,草总是绿的,花总是红的,山总是青的。不论是狂奔、小跑,还是被恶犬追赶夺路而逃都是一个“跑”。一言以蔽之,用最简单的动词来表现这个复杂的世界。你认为造成这种现象的原因是什么呢? First, learning test “beautiful moment” “beautiful” disease. In the piece-writing exercise under the theme of “beautiful moments”, the following four deficiencies are prominently manifested. 1.“Speaking thick words”. In many students’ pens, the sky is always blue, the grass is always green, the flowers are always red, and the mountains are always blue. Whether it is mad running, trotting, or being chased by a vicious dog to escape the road is a “run”. In a nutshell, the simplest verb is used to represent this complex world. What do you think is the cause of this phenomenon?