“作文难,难作文,下笔无言难成文;头儿空,肚儿空,空来空去空对空。”这就是中学生作文的现状。虚情矫饰、瞎编滥造、无病呻吟,是学生写作的通病。为老师作文,为应试作文,唯独将主角——“我”,排斥于作文之外。“我”的思想、感情和个性都在这种编造作文中枯萎了。“我”没了, “The composition is difficult, it is difficult to write, and it is difficult to write without words; the head is empty, the belly is empty, and the empty space is empty.” This is the status quo of secondary school students’ composition. Unscrupulous pretense, fabrication, and illness are common problems in student writing. Writing for the teacher, writing for the exam, only the protagonist - “I”, is excluded from the composition. The thoughts, feelings, and personality of “I” are withered in this fabricated composition. “I” is gone,