在记叙文写作教学中,中学生作文最常见的毛病是内容空洞,缺少真情实感。我们常常归咎于学生,说他们缺乏生活,缺少观察,没有积累,感到无能为力。 但是,实际情况却不完全是这样。有时跟学生聊天,我发现,讲自己的经历,讲自己的左邻右舍,亲朋戚友,讲自己看见过听到过的有趣的事情,他们常常讲得头头是道,有声有色;某时某事有什么感觉,往往几句话一说就十分恰切; In the teaching of narrative writing, the most common defects of middle school students' essay are the content is empty and the real feeling is lacking. We often blame the students for their lack of life, lack of observation, lack of accumulation and feeling powerless. However, the actual situation is not exactly the case. Sometimes chatting with students, I found that speaking about my experiences, speaking about my neighbors, relatives and friends, speaking of interesting things I have heard, they often speak rhetoric, What feeling, often a few words is very appropriate;