八年前,我曾为一家全国性大报举办的“科技征文”活动写了一篇应征作品《朝阳从“夕阳工业”中升起》,文章记述了矿工运用机械化装备的一波三折和采掘机械化在煤矿崭露曙光的事实。该报编辑认为此文“选题不错,写得也很生动、深刻”。但感许多情节和细节“不可理解”,比如,文章中记述的掘进工人拉走了装矸机,恢复用掏扒、畚箕来人工排矸的场面,编辑来信中间道:“按通常的理解,机械 Eight years ago, I wrote a solicitation for a “science and technology essay” event organized for a national newspaper. “The sun rises from the setting sun” in the industry. The article describes the twists and turns and the mining mechanization of mechanized equipment used by miners at The fact that the mine has revealed its light. The newspaper editor that this article “a good title, writing is also very vivid and profound.” However, many plots and details are “incomprehensible.” For example, as the tunneling workers described in the article drew away the gangue machine and restored the scene of artificial gangue disposal by using dig and scoop, the editor wrote in the middle of the letter: "As is commonly understood, mechanical