“人们弯腰……那是精神和人格升华的先兆”——从比喻引出,过渡到事例——涵盖古今中外——论证,重点论述“学会弯腰”的意义。此文还需要升格:或只论述“意义”,但要更换新颖的材料。或论述“学会弯腰”的措施,从现有事例中归纳出可资借鉴的经验。 “People bend over...it is a precursor to the sublimation of spirit and personality” — from the metaphor to the transition to the case — covering ancient and modern China and foreign countries — argumentation, focusing on the meaning of “learning to bend over”. This article also needs to be upgraded: Or just talk about “meaning,” but replace the new material. Or discuss the “learning to bend over” measures, summing up lessons learned from existing examples.