此文的出彩句是“爷爷把小东东的手与自己的手合并起来”。其意象很独特——“合并”;其蕴含很深刻——“完整”,为了完整,作出一生的付出。还需要锦上添花的是,应在“小东东第一天上幼儿园回来”矛盾解决后,展开新的矛盾,进一步充实内容。 The text of this article is “Grandpa merges Xiao Dongdong’s hand with his own hand.” Its image is very unique - “merger”; it contains a profound - “complete”, for the sake of completeness, to make a lifelong effort. What also needs icing on the cake is that, after the contradiction between the “back home on the first day in Xiaodongdong” solution, a new contradiction should be launched to further enrich the content.