编者推荐:此文能上升到‘持’的层面上来写‘洁’。第一自然段中有‘洁’,第三自然段中有‘操’——确立角度。从第三自然段起,一直用‘持’‘洁’二字领起充满矛盾的事件——提升层面。如果能让编者在引用此二字时,不必两次用双引号隔开,就能更加吸引‘读者’的眼球!第七自然段中的‘世人’应改为‘世俗’。 Editor’s Note: This article can be up to the ’hold’ level to write ’clean’. There is a ’clean’ in the first section of the natural world and a ’manipulation’ in the third section of the natural world. From the third paragraph onwards, it has always used the words “holding” and “cleaning” to lead a contradictory event - raising the level. It would be more attractive to readers if they were asked to quote the word twice without using double quotes! The “world” in the seventh paragraph should be changed to ’secular’.