一、何为“尝试写作”陈金铭(《小学语文教师》编辑部):先请上课的老师简要说说这节课中哪些地方体现了“尝试写作”。徐姣英(浙江省绍兴市漓渚镇中心小学):本次写作的参观地点我选择了棠棣村,因为这是孩子们熟悉的生活环境。我尝试让学生提取身边熟悉的生活场景,用作文去表达自己的真实生活。在教学中,我处处遵循“学生先尝试,教师后引导”的基本原则,引导学生有序观察,让学生先尝试用自己的顺序观察,再引导多个 First, what is “try to write ” Chen Jinming (“primary school language teacher” Editorial Department): first ask the class teacher to briefly explain where this class embodies “try to write ”. Xu Jiaoying (Lizhu Town Central Primary School, Shaoxing, Zhejiang): I chose Tong Di Village for the place of this writing because it is a familiar living environment for children. I try to get students to take familiar scenes around life and use the essay to express their real life. In teaching, I followed the basic principle of “students first try, teacher guide”, to guide students to observe in order, let students first try to observe in their own order, and then guide multiple