行文粗疏,是高考作文答卷的通病之一,也是作文备考的一大难点。写人记事,则交待介绍走过场;写景状物,则浮光掠影粗线条。考场阅卷,读不出人物个性,渎不出景物特征,读不出真挚情感,何以能得高分?偶有感人之作,令人怦然心动,眼前一亮——大凡是文笔细腻,金针密线。试推荐一例,鉴赏品评。 The rough writing is one of the common problems in the composition of the college entrance examination essay, and it is also a major difficulty in composition preparation. Write a note, then explain the introduction to go through the field; Candidates grading through the examination room, can’t read the characters, can’t read the characteristics of the scenery, can’t read the true feelings, how can they get high scores? Sometimes there are touching works that are full of emotions and bright eyes - most of them are delicately written. The golden needle is dense. Try to recommend one case, appreciation of the review.