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【设计突破】亲情,是人类永恒的情感,是作文教学绕不过去的话题。学生表现亲情的作文通常有两类:一类写平常状态下的亲情——点滴的付出,真诚的关怀,涓涓细流的爱。另一类写非常状态下的亲情——伟大的牺牲,无私的成全,震天撼地的爱。可是,前者司空见惯容易流于俗套,后者难能可贵往往失之真切。如何打破写作教学的惯性,突破题材的局限,让亲情类作文更有生活质感和思维力度?笔者做了一次大胆的尝试。本设计拟从以下三个方面进
Design breakthrough】 【affection, is the eternal human emotions, writing education around the topic. There are usually two types of compositions for students to express their affection: a kind of affection written under normal conditions - giving up, sincere care, trickle love. Another kind of family under the very state of writing - great sacrifices, selfless fulfillment, shaking earth love. However, the former commonplace easily flow in the stereotypes, the latter is rare valuable often lost. How to break the inertia of writing teaching, to break through the limitations of the subject, to make the affectionate composition even more life texture and thinking? I made a bold attempt. The design from the following three aspects