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题目1.夏日2.夕阳(原人教版)提示:这两个题目所要求写的都是我们平常十分熟悉的景物。要写好此类作文,关键是要融入自己的情感,真正走进自然,走进生活,用纯净的心灵发现景物中的美。如夏日里如火的太阳、欢唱的鸣蝉、葱茏的树木、吐舌的小狗、暖暖的河水、腾烟的土地,还有不怕炎热在田间劳作的农民、顶着烈日在工地忙碌的工人……在收集、整理完这些素材之后,就可以运用我们所学过的景物描写方法,如可以借鉴本册第三单元几篇写景名作的写作技法,选取一个独特的角度,写出夏日独特的魅力,写出自己的独特感受。写第二个题目,我们可以以高兴的心情去欣赏那火红的落日,注视它那绚烂的背景,凝视它那渐缺的容颜,感受它那柔美的余晖,或许会产生“夕阳无限好,‘灿烂’在黄昏”的美好慨叹!此外熏还要注意以下几点:1.观察主体,勿忘背景;2.注意变化,写出夕阳的动态;3.寄情于物,抒写感受。(胡志林)
Topic 1. Summer 2. Sunset (formerly PEP) Tip: These two topics require that we always write scenes that we are very familiar with. The key to writing such essays is to integrate their own emotions, truly walk into nature, walk into life, and discover the beauty of the scenery with pure hearts. Such as the sun in the summer, the singing sun, the singing gongs, the verdant trees, the tongue-bearing puppies, the warm rivers, the land of pent-ups, the peasants who are not afraid of the hot work in the fields, and live in the hot sun on the construction site. Busy workers... After collecting and sorting out these materials, we can use the methods of scene description we have learned. For example, we can use the writing techniques of the masterpieces in the third unit of this book to select a unique angle and write out Summer’s unique charm, write your own unique feelings. To write the second topic, we can enjoy the fiery sunset with joy, watching its splendid background, staring at its missing face, feeling its soft afterglow, and perhaps creating a “sunset is infinite,” Brilliant ’in the evening’ beautiful sigh! In addition smoked also pay attention to the following points: 1. Observe the subject, do not forget the background; 2. Pay attention to changes, write the dynamics of the sunset; 3. Love things, write feelings. (Hu Zhilin)