作文评语具有评价和导向的双重作用 ,是提高学生作文能力和认识能力的有效方式。评语不仅要分析习作的成败得失 ,更重要的是动之以情、晓之以理、导之以趣 ,使学生从中启迪智慧、增长见识、激发写作欲望。一、情趣人非木石 ,孰能无情 ?中学生内心复杂而多变 ,他们大多都羞于将 Composition reviews have the dual role of evaluation and guidance, and are effective ways to improve students’ writing ability and cognitive ability. The reviews not only need to analyze the successes and failures of the assignments, but more importantly, they should be emotional, intelligent, and interesting so that students can inspire wisdom, increase their knowledge, and stimulate their desire for writing. First, the non-Music people in love, how can you be ruthless? The students’ inner complex and changeable, most of them are ashamed to be