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大家都知道早起早睡身体好，今天的作文就来点健康教育吧。来看看这篇范文。请用英语写一篇论述“早起”(early rising)重要性的短文。
论点：早起有益。
论据：早起可呼吸到新鲜空气，做早操，对身体健康有好处；早起对学习有好处；早起可从容制定工作计划，对工作有好处。
结论：晚起的人都应早起。
注 意
1．短文应包括论点、论据和结论，但不需逐条翻译。
2．可适当增加细节，运用转承词语，使短文连贯。
3．词数100~120。
Early Rising
Early rising benefits① us in many ways.
First②，it helps to keep us fit. We all need fresh air. Besides，by taking morning exercises we can improve our health.
Second，it can help us in our studies. In the morning we can learn more quickly.
Third，it can enable us③ to plan our work for the day. We cannot work well without a proper plan. Early rising can also give us enough time to get ready for our work.
So④ we say that those who⑤ always get up late should make great effort to⑥ getting up early.
阅读指导
总体来说文章还是很优秀的。
① benefit这个词语用得很好。属于加分词语。benefit somebody，使某人受益。
② first，second这些词条让文章逻辑清晰。
③ enable somebody to do something，加分词组。
④ 总结性语句，让文章收尾有力。
⑤ those who的从句用得非常简单漂亮。
⑥ make effort to do something，而不是doing something。这是文章唯一遗憾。
编辑/孙栎栎
论点：早起有益。
论据：早起可呼吸到新鲜空气，做早操，对身体健康有好处；早起对学习有好处；早起可从容制定工作计划，对工作有好处。
结论：晚起的人都应早起。
注 意
1．短文应包括论点、论据和结论，但不需逐条翻译。
2．可适当增加细节，运用转承词语，使短文连贯。
3．词数100~120。
Early Rising
Early rising benefits① us in many ways.
First②，it helps to keep us fit. We all need fresh air. Besides，by taking morning exercises we can improve our health.
Second，it can help us in our studies. In the morning we can learn more quickly.
Third，it can enable us③ to plan our work for the day. We cannot work well without a proper plan. Early rising can also give us enough time to get ready for our work.
So④ we say that those who⑤ always get up late should make great effort to⑥ getting up early.
阅读指导
总体来说文章还是很优秀的。
① benefit这个词语用得很好。属于加分词语。benefit somebody，使某人受益。
② first，second这些词条让文章逻辑清晰。
③ enable somebody to do something，加分词组。
④ 总结性语句，让文章收尾有力。
⑤ those who的从句用得非常简单漂亮。
⑥ make effort to do something，而不是doing something。这是文章唯一遗憾。
编辑/孙栎栎