青果微点评:全文用第一人称,其实就是写了自己一路的心理历程,从前面的伤心,到后面的惊恐,再到峰回路转,读者的心也随着你千回百转。那天晚上,从陕西老家来的大哥要坐火车返程,他要回去上学了。我和爸爸去送他,我们都依依不舍,大哥一直趴在车窗前看着我们,我鼻子酸酸的,生怕眼泪掉下来。我看着大哥,边朝他招手边向前走。走着走着,眼看就要摸住窗户的时候,我突然眼前一黑,掉下站台,落到了火车轨道里。我一下子惊醒了,出了一身冷汗,感觉到地面上的石块儿特别烫, Green micro comments: The full text of the first person, in fact, is to write their own psychological journey all the way from the front of the sad to the back of the panic, and then to the peak turn, the reader’s heart with you thousands of turns. That night, big brother from Shaanxi hometown to take the train return, he wanted to go back to school. My father and I sent him, we all reluctantly, the big brother has been lying in front of the window watching us, my nose sour, for fear of tears fall. I looked at my brother, walking towards him and walked forward. Walking, seeing is about to touch the window, I suddenly a black eyes, fell off the platform, fell on the train tracks. I suddenly woke up, out of a cold sweat, felt the stones on the ground especially hot,