老师酷评:子幸是个善于观察的孩子,也是个热爱生活和读书的孩子,平时喜欢写读书笔记,喜欢摘抄优美句子,写起文章几乎都是信手拈来。我心仪的地方有很多,有绿树成荫、莺啼燕喃的绿荫公园,有花香馥郁、景色宜人的薰衣草公园……但最能打动我的,非雁鸣湖莫属。在一个晴好的周末,我们全家驱车游览雁鸣湖。进入东门,映入眼帘的是一片无际无涯的花海。这些花有的红得像一团团熊熊燃烧的火焰,有的黄得似一块块刚从炼金炉里提炼出来的金子,有的白得如一片片从天而降的洁白无瑕的雪花……它 Teacher commented: Son of fortunate is a good observer of children, but also a love life and study of children, usually like to write a book notes, like excerpts beautiful sentences, write articles are almost always come in handy. My favorite places are many, tree-lined, ying yan yan shade park, fragrant flowers, pleasant scenery lavender park ...... But the most impress me, none other than non-Yanming Lake. On a sunny weekend, our family drove to Yanming Lake. Into the East Gate, greeted is a boundless flower. These flowers have the red like a round burning flames, some yellow like a piece of gold just extracted from the alchemical furnace, and some like a piece of white flawless snow falling from the sky ... it