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本文情景交融,如诗如画,将刚刚讲的“五招”作文绝学运用得可谓是得心应手,不露痕迹。一、开头以对比的手法,突出故乡小河的质朴和恬美。二、第二自然段从细节入手,描绘河中美景,观察仔细,其中比喻和拟人手法的运用为文章增色不少。三、第三自然段从回忆入手,写小河给自己带来的乐趣,语言俏皮,读来让人会心一笑。四、结尾升华主题,写出对小河的怀念之情。
This blend of scenarios, picturesque, just say “five strokes ” essay must be used absolutely must be handy, without any trace. First, the beginning of a comparative approach, highlighting the hometown stream of rustic and Tian Mei. Second, start with the details of the second paragraph of nature, depicting the beauty of the river, observed carefully, the use of metaphors and personification of the article adds a lot of color for the article. Third, the third section of the natural start from the memory, write a small river to bring their own fun, language playful, read people heart knowing smile. Fourth, the end of the sublimation theme, write the love of the river nostalgia.